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In conversation, I just said:

Почему-то у меня это вылетело из головы, а у нее и подавно... Хорошо, что у меня в памяти все воскресло вовремя!

The context of the conversation was: We've each been so busy lately that it completely slipped our minds that we were expecting a visitor later on this afternoon.

In hindsight, I get the impression that the three consecutive "у меня/нее" stylistically leave something to be desired, but I can't figure out how to work round that without making the sentence ambiguous.

How can this idea be effectively paraphrased without repeating the "у + pronoun"?

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  • Because in this particular case one person is a male and the other is a female, you can drop it altogether and go with "хорошо что вовремя [всё] вспомнил".
    – AR.
    Jun 28, 2019 at 5:48
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    you are wrong - it's completely fine to be repetitive in that way.
    – shabunc
    Jun 28, 2019 at 6:56

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The first sentence sounds good as is (a possible version of its second part: ... не говоря уже о ней.) The second sentence can be changed into:

Хорошо, что я вовремя всё вспомнил!

Хорошо, что всё вспомнилось в нужный момент!

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This repetition is not that bad, especially in spoken language. Russians do like repeating. There is even a manner of speech called "beads", which is broadly used in church (and Stalin was fond of it):

Мы пойдём на рыбалку. На рыбалку мы пойдём с утра. На рыбалку мы пойдём на речку. На речку мы пойдём втроём ...

But if you still want to avoid repeating, you may just use names or other designations:

Почему-то у меня это вылетело из головы, а у Лены и подавно... Хорошо, что я вспомнил вовремя!

P.S. "у меня в памяти все воскресло" is too dramatic for casual situations, it is better to use "у меня в памяти все всплыло".

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